Tuesday, December 15, 2009
History Blog #4
When i made the decision to be in honors, I was already prepared to work hard and put forth my best effort. Throughout the period of time that I did receive honors assignments, the work load started becoming heavier and heavier. Fortunately, with lots of determination, focusing, and energy i was able to work hard and get through obstacles.
As for my writing, i came into the 11th grade knowing how to write general essays, but by being in honors and Randy's class period, I was able to take my writing to a whole new level. I went from just writing everything that was on my mind and correcting any typos and errors, to writing filtered out thoughts that was in my mind in a more structured, organized, and creative way that was easy and interesting for the reader. Blog entries, note sessions, book readings, and Randy's teachings, were all keys that opened the door for me to better writing.
The only thing that I would do differently if I had to do this past semester of honors over again, is manage my time better. There were lots of times when I would get distracted or off task, due to out of control energy and tempting classmates. Everyone knows that I have lots of energy, but there were times when I should've controlled my energy a lot better, and tried to focus a lot harder to help not only myself, but those around me who were trying to concentrate as well. I have to admit that doing this became a little hard, because I felt like even when I tried to focus, there was always that someone that tried to either irritate me on purpose or get me of task. As a result, instead of getting further on whatever was supposed to be completed at that moment, I was actually falling behind. A solution to this problem then and for the future, is to just put forth more effort towards focusing and remembering that the only person responsible for my grades is myself, so that's who I need to worry about---myself.
My goals for next semester of honors is to just keep doing my best, controlling my energy better, getting an A, and managing my time better. The steps that I plan to take in order to achieve these goals, is to take advantage of resources (notes, books, web, Randy, etc., etc.), take good notes, remain positive no matter what, engage in class discussions and note taking sessions, and try hard to comprehend vocabulary and content.
If i were to choose any part of literature and History for our honors work, i would choose slavery. The reason why I would choose slavery, is because it's a topic that I've always been interested in, and it also leads to other possible topics such as, segregation, presidential elections, wars, and trades. So not only will we be able to learn something mew, but tie in and expand other topics that we've already learned as well.
Tuesday, December 8, 2009
Nature Writing Essay
After many mistakes, Krakauer manages to piece together his own puzzle of what haopened to whom and when during the climb, but the questions he struggles with in almost every situation are "why" and "how". Why does Anatoli Boukreev climb so far ahead of his clients? How does Krakuer mistake Martin Adams for Andy Harris? Why doesn't Rob Hall enforce the two o' clock turn around time? How does Beck Weathers find the strength to literaaly rais himself from the dead not once, but twice?!!! Why did no one notice the storm that hit during the afternoon of the summit? Why do the South Africans refuse to help? Why does Lopsang Sherpa exhaust himself by hauling not only his heavy equipment, but Sandy Pittman, up the mountain as well? Krakauer really struggles and hassles with these questions, attempting to answer them in a variety of different ways, all of which are worthy of further questioning and investigation. Hypoxia, or the influence of high altitude on decision-making, perception, and memory, further distorts and blurs everyones accounts of what happened on Everest, and makes it even more difficult to figure out how and why.
By being under the powerful influence of Hypoxia, Krajuer no longer had the option of functioning by himself, but becoming a puppet to Hypoxia. I'm asssuming that once Hypoxia overtook Krakauers body, his brainpower and process of thinking clearly began to decrease, during and even still after the climb, giving him no right to to still try and piece together wha he thought took place on the mountain. However, throughout the book, Krakuer did portray himself as physically being with the rest of the climbers, but mentally separated from the rest of the climbers. Loke on page 167 when Hall made it very clear to Krakauer that he was to climb no higher until the whole group caught up, his thought response was: "I felt frustrated about wasting so much time and peeved at falling behind everybody else." It was clearly obvious that Hall knew that Krakauer was getting ahead of himself and was trying to put a hold on him so that everyone could say together, however, Krakauer was becoming irritated and wanted to climb at his ow pace. Somehow, this could've benn what decreased his consideration for others, increased his frustration, and then led him to criticize other people.
At the end of the day, Krakauer knew that it is unlikely that the other clients would be capable of helping him if he were to get stranded, and he knows that in order to be as safe as possible, self-reliance is essential. As a result, Krakauer often broke away from the group, climbing ahead of his teammates. He chose to avoid packs and traffic jams and relied on his own mountain climbing experience throughout the expedition. By doing this, I felt like Krakauer both helped and hurt himself. He helped himself by not putting turning over all his trust and life into someone’s hands and being aware of things on his own, and hurt himself by strongly letting his anger get the best of him while under the influence of Hypoxia. Eventually, individualism got the best of him, verbally wounding and hurting relatives of the deceased through a criticizing piece he wrote, exposed in Outside magazine. In the magazine, Krakauer, in my opinion, did not acurately address and explain what took place on the mountain. I feel like some of the things that he said were not thought out properly, and as a result he began receiving angry letters from people who did not agree with his version of what happened. One of the angriest was received from Scott Fisher's sister, Lisa Fischer-Luckenbach, who wrote the following in her letter:
........"What I am reading is a YOUR OWN ego frantically struggling to make sense out of what happened. No amount of your analyzing, criticizing, judging, or hypothesizing will bring the peace you are looking for. There are no answers. No one is at fault. No one is to blame. Everyone was doing their best at the given time under the given circumstances."
Through her words, I could almost feel the hurt and anger she must've been feeling while she was writing this letter, and also reading what was said by Krakauer in the magazine. Although, acoording to Krakauer, his intent was not to criticize any of the climbers, but to tell the story of what happened on the mountain and be as thorough and accurate as possible, he was still in the wrong by even trying to address anthing that happened on the mountain with anyone else, when his own mind and actions weren't even in their proper state when he was on the mountain!!
In the end, even though Krakauer did recognize the anger that he brought upon lots of people, and responded by expressing his "profound condolences" that's still not the point. The point, is that no matter how many condolences or apologies that he tries to give out, what he said, to this day, is still known and recognized by readers and people all over the world, and the people that died on Mt.Everest cannot be brought back.
Friday, December 4, 2009
Nature Writing~~Essay Draft
Saturday, November 21, 2009
The Great Gatsby!
As a whole, The Great Gatsby helped me as a reader to understand that even though the American Dream may be present in certain situations, it's not always a guarantee that there will be walls blocking outside forces, actions, and people, from corrupting the dream.
~Cited Source~
The Great Gatsby- F. Scott Fitzgerald
Sunday, November 15, 2009
Honors Essay #3
Wednesday, November 11, 2009
Your MSB Organization
Sunday, November 8, 2009
Gatsby! Ch 1-4
Tuesday, November 3, 2009
Beginning The Great Gatsby
By F. Scott Fitzgerald choosing the specific narrator that he chose rather than a different kind of person or style, he accomplishes the idea of sort of taking you through an organized journey. As a reader you're able to get informed about the characters and the plot, but at the same time you're also able to enjoy and understand the book as well.
Monday, November 2, 2009
Critique a Professional Example


The most successful element of the scrapbook example are the photos and the way the layout is set up. It's creative and also easy to navigate around and understand.
The main message of the scrapbook page is that the world as a whole has the power to make a difference in the beauty of our beaches and our environment. The reason why i know this i because it's clearly stated in Kennedy's quote and it's in really big letters on the page.
I think that the intended audience for this piece of work is anyone who can read. People of all ages even toddlers can start early trying to help get our environments and beaches a lot cleaner. From simply disposing of trash properly to volunteering in beach clean-ups.
I think that the main specific elements that come together to deliver the main message are the photos and the quote. I feel like the quote was the intro for the main performance while the photos were the main performancprohee.
To get my message delivered and my essential question answered for the MSB project I'm going to combine information about mineral cosmetics and ocean water quality to show how the two contribute to each other, the market, and society as a whole.
One technique or strategy that I noticed the creator used for this work was the "less is more" startegy. He only used one large photo, a quote, a straight to the point write up, a headline, and a few little objects or gadgets for decoration. I feel like by him putting not too much and not too little amounts of information and decorations it made the crapbook page very neat, exciting, informative, and attention grabbing all at the same time without overwhelming the viewer.
The reason why i chose this work example is because i feel like it really represents a creative professional scrapbok page. I also chose this example because i love the layout and i would like to do a scrapbook instead of an album. I feel like an album is sort of pushing the line and i don't really feel think i would be able to have enough access to studio time. But hopefully my fans will understand my circumstances and continue looking forward to my album later on down the road.
Thursday, October 29, 2009
Honors Novel #2
Newspapers & MSB
Monday, October 26, 2009
MSB people, groups, and orgs!
Thursday, October 22, 2009
Honors History Writing #2
Mckinley's tariff, a surcharge or overcharge on imported goods designed to protect domestic industries by raising costs and and rstricting access to cheaper foreign goods, became part of the campaign platform McKinley ran on and was a foundation of his economic philosophy.
With the help of McKinleys best asset, his campaign manager Mark Hanna, also chairman of the National Republican Committee, Mckinley was saved from an embarrassing bankruptcy by raising money to pay off a loan for which the co-govener co-signed. By doing this, McKinley is now able to really let his skills and his desire for gold to be the currency for America shine through.
In the end, when Mckinley becomes President, his decisions will have positive repercussions for years to come. His drive and outlooks on life and America will lead to new and improved ways of living and spending money. America will definetely not regret electing William McKinley to become President, and everything will soon become fabulous!!
Wednesday, October 21, 2009
MSB comments, ideas, plans, critiques and more!
Monday, October 19, 2009
Industrialization and Coastal Environments
Saturday, October 17, 2009
Possible MSB Products

lyrics ex. "I'm a peasant by some standardsBut in your eyes I'm a queenYou see potential in all my flawsAnd that's exactly what I need...."
Her outfit, hair, props, and make-up are fierce, and her black shadowy background gives off sort of a secretive fierce vibe. So as you can see, everything just sort of all ties in together, which helps her fans get a really good understanding of the message and image she is trying to portray. For my own album, i would like to do the same. I want to take photos, write lyrics, and record songs that tie in really well to my main question, and that my fans can enjoy and learn from.
~Ideas to Use~
*Strong/Creative Photo- It's really important that my photos are very creative and connected to my product as a whole. The pictures could be the firstthing that my fans look at, so it's important to have them set-up and chosen in a way that is interesting, easy to understand, and a boost to my overall product.
*Strong Meaningful Lyrics- In order for my fans to be able to enjoy and learn something from my songs, my lyrics need to be well thought out, organized, creative, and fabulous. It's always good for a song to hav a nice groovie beat, but eventually the song becomes pointless when people realize that the song has no actual meaning.
*Powerful Theme- The album absolutely has to have a powerful theme. Since my main question would be how does ocean water affect mineral make-up?, then my theme would be focuse on ocean water and mineral cosmetis/fashion. So I would somehow have to morph the two together to make the final product flow nicely.
~Scrapbook (idea #2)~
I love being in pictures, and i love taking pictures as well. For this product, i wanted to create a scrapbook with a variety of different well-taken photos (with a few edited in Photoshop) that connected to my main question. Along with the photos, there would be a high quality piece of writing/summary that explained each photo and what it meant, and different data graphs, facts, and captions, that guide the reader/viewer through the pathway that leads to the answer to my main queston.
~Professional Work Example~

I chose this scrapbook page as an example of professional work because it's very colorful, interesting, organized in a unique way, and it grabbed my attention. If i were to choose to do the dcrapbook, i would wabt all my photos to stand out and grab the reader/viewer's attention. I also chose this as an example because of the type and the format of the words. While looking at the scrapbook page, i noticed that there weren't too many words, and there weren't too little words. It was just the right amont of words that could explain what the picture(s) or the page was all about, while reframing from boring the reader.
~Ideas to Use~
*Color Scheme- i really liked how this person chose colrs that were somewhat bright and fabulous, but not too bright to the point where the reader no longer wants to keep reading or looking through the scrapbook. So i would do the same for my own scrapbook, which is to be bright, but stay right. Meaning, use bright colors that will attract the reader, but not colors that would scare the reader away.
*Word Choiuce/Format- Sometimes reading long text can be boring, so i would want the captions and the descriptions to be staight to the point, so that the unnecessary words and sentences can be eliminated.
*Close-Up Photos- I really like how the flower is zoomed in because it helps me adjust to what that part of the scrapbook is going to be about. Chosing photos for a scrapbook can be difficult sometimes, but it's a lot easier when you know your purpose for doing the scrapbook, and how you want the purpose to be potrayed through your scrapbook.
Wednesday, October 14, 2009
MSB Questions and Resorces
Saturday, October 10, 2009
Honors Novel #1
Huck's youth is an important factor in his moral education over the course of the novel. Sometimes we believe that only a child is open-minded enough to undergo the kind of development that Huck does. Since Huck and Tom are young, their age lends a sense of "play" to their actions, which excuses them in certain ways and also enhances the novel's commentary on slavery and society, helping the reader to get a better understanding of Huck's emvironment and how he adapts and learns from it.
Wednesday, October 7, 2009
Media Saves the Beach questions
Friday, October 2, 2009
Honors History Writng #1
Mentally blinded humans? You know, those people who do things without taking in the consideration of others. However, everyone was entitled to their own opinions and beliefs. Due to friction between different races, thoughts and beliefs interferred with each other causing lots of negativity and conflicts.
Union and Confederates; or the good and the bad. Union (north) being the group that is completely against slavery, racism, and segregation, while the confederates (south) are absolute supporters of slavery, racism and segregation. Why? Because in America, both past and present, finding the best solutions takes countless number of opinions from a variety of different people, while in other cases, finding a good solution only takes the strong and steady thoughts of just one person.
Wednesday, September 30, 2009
What's the deal with reconstruction?
~Excerpt From Modern Issue~
Thursday, September 24, 2009
Media Saves The Beach in The News
Tuesday, September 22, 2009
Media Saves The Beach
I know that there are a lot of options and mini projects you can choose from with the Media Saves the Beach project. However, I love music so I think that I'm going to create an album. The actual booklet that will go inside the album cover will incorporate the writing and some facts, while the actual song on the album will incorporate most of the facts along with a fabulous beat. Then, the album cover will be some sort of creative designed picture that somehow connects to the beach and the things that go in within the beach water.
Tuesday, September 15, 2009
AmericanIcons~ Final Product

Fab⋅u⋅loc⋅i⋅ty [fab-u-los-i-tee]
-noun
1. An act of being yourself, unique, smart, fabulous, creative, and above all, humble.
Looking at Beyonce is similar to looking at myself in the mirror. I see beauty, hard work, power, and intelligence. I’ve never been one to pattern the things that I do after someone else, but I have been one to become inspired by someone else. I consider myself a blooming flower. A flower that needs my own elements to grow and bloom properly, but also the help and guidance from others to bloom to my fullest potential.
Beyonce first inspired me when I was around 8 years old in the year 2001. During this year Beyonce was not yet a solo artist, and her first album Writing’s on the Wall, was released with the former group Destiny’s Child. There are lots of songs that I remember hearing and enjoying at the time, but not as much as I enjoyed listening to Destiny’s Child and the lead voice of Beyonce.
I’ve always been a very prissy girly girl that was attracted to girly activities and objects, along with girly music. Sometimes, it was almost a mind tug of war between an alter ego and myself. One side of me only wanted to be that fabulous diva, while another side of me wanted to let that side go and become more open-minded to more meaningful and important thoughts and ideas.
Through the lyrics of Destiny’s Child, I began to find myself. I became a lot more connected to life and the different decisions that I was making. Unfortunately, it was still something else that I was longing for, something more that I wanted to connect to and be apart of. Soon…it was found.
In the year 2004, Beyonce became a solo artist and I became a reflection. I began making and gaining all the connections that I was hoping for. Everytime I watched Beyonce on and off stage, she exhibited such diverse characteristics, emotions, and ideas similar to myself. It was almost as if Beyonce and I both had an installed knob in our minds and bodies that turned itself from high to low according to what situations and environments we were in. Making this connection helped me to understand my icon and I a lot better.
Everyone knows that I am a very smart girl, but at times can be a little too loud and energetic. Over time, however, I’ve learned to control my strong personality and adapt to my surroundings. For example, if I’m in class listening to a lecture or trying to take notes, my knob would turn to low and I would become a little more reserved and toned down. The reason for this, is so that I would not distract myself, or others from learning and absorbing new information. Now, if it were time for a project, my switch would turn to high so that I could incorporate my traits, creativity, and energy into the project.
As a result of having these mental switches and becoming inspired by Beyonce, I’ve become a lot more balanced, and my actions and thoughts have remained well thought out and organized. I’ve learned that It’s all a matter of staying true to myself, while also being aware of my audience and knowing how to portray and exhibit myself in front of them. I am an icon that would like to be known and remembered as a fabulous hard worker that tried my best to spread positivity, and help myself while helping others along the way.
Sources
Oscar Hidalgo, New York Times, “Beyonce Knowles,” http://topics.nytimes.com/topics/reference/timestopics/people/k/beyonce_knowles/index.html. (Accessed September 13, 2009)
Norment Lynn, Ebony, “Beyonce heats up Hollywood,” http://www.highbeam.com/doc/1G1-88581939.html. (Accessed September 13, 2009)
American Icons~ Reflection
Two writing technique that I found myself constantly using for my artist statement were "Make meaning early" and creating a relationship with my audience. When I first began writing my artist statement, I knew that I wanted to get straight to the point without including unnecessary information. By learning and using making meaning early I was able to do that in a way that was in order and not too confusing for the reader to understand. I chose to really emphasize creating a relationshiop with my audience because I feel like when a reader is able to connect and grasp your writing, they enjoy it a lot more, and they don't get bored as easily.
Sunday, September 13, 2009
Photography Techniques
Latest Draft~ Photo
Friday, September 11, 2009
Latest Draft~ Artist Statement
* I know I'm going to add more to my artist stsement. I'm qalso going to change a little bit of my word choice and incorporate some of the writing tips I learned in class.
* My #1 goal is to write an artist statement that my audience can understand, enjoy, and learn from.
Fab u loc i ty [fab-u-los-i-tee]
-noun
1. An act of being yourself, unique, smart, fabulous, creative, and above all, humble.
Looking at Beyonce is similar to looking at myself in a mirror. I see beauty, hardwork, power, and intelligence.
I've never been one to pattern the things that I do after someone else. But i am one to become inspired by someone else. I consider myself a blooming flower. A flower that needs it sown elements to grow and bloom properly, but also the help and guidance of others to bloom to my fullest potential.
I first became inspired by Beyonce when I was aound 8 years old in the year 2001. During this year, Beyonce was not yet a solo artist, but a member of the former group Destiny's Child. Their first album, Writing's on the Wall, was released and went straight to number 1 on the charts. There are a lot of songs that I remember hearing and enjoying, but not as much as I enjoyed listening to Destiny's Child.
Friday, September 4, 2009
American Icons~ Resources
This live performance of Beyonce is an example of her energy, glamour, and alter ego being shown. Her hard work and new ideas were also shown through her powerful voice, dance moves, and stage presence.

*VIDEO- BEYONCE ON TINA TURNER*
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v-euXcZF81cpM&feature-fvw
I used this as an example to show that even though Tina Turner was in the music industry way before most of the current artists, shes still influencing and inspiring most of them today.
*VIDEO- PROUD MARY LIVE*
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v-6-6-7N9AxTE&feature-related
I used this live performance as an example to show that Tina was able to endure all negativity and still pour her heart and energy into her performance. Seeing her on stage, you wouldve never guessed that she was abused mentally and physically, because she was so good at putting the negativity to the back and the positivity to the front.
*BOOK- I, TINA*
I used this book as an example to show that Tina Turner was not ashamed of sharing her experiences with others, and allowing them to learn not only from the mistakes she made, but the positive decisions as well.
Wednesday, September 2, 2009
American Icons~ Ideas

I look up to Beyonce because she has her own unique way of communicating with her fans and the entertainment business. One minute she can be trying to help less fortunate people, another minute she could be owning the stage at a sold out concert. Every time Beyonce goes to record in the studio, shes always sure to make sure that every song recorded by her has a message that her fans can relate to. So as a result, people go out and spend their money on an album to not only support her, but her meaningful well thought out lyrics as well.
Beyonce has always been influenced and inspired by the style and singing of Tina Turner. Tina Turner incorporated lots of style, energy, power, and control into her dance moves and songs. Beyonce does the same thing, but adds her own younger and latest dance moves, sounds, and beats. To this day, Beyonce continues to sell millions of albums, and have countless #1 hits, including her most recent; Sweet Dreams. Beyonce is currently on top right now and its going to take lots of effort and hard work to bring her down.

Tina turner is the queen of R&B. Tina Turner has paved the way for countless female solo artists and groups. If it wsn't for Tina Turner, lots of the songs that we all love to listen to wouldnt even exsist. I wasnt born during the time when a lot of her outstanding albums or singles were released, but after watching the Ike and tina movie I became really inspired by her. She experienced not only mental pain and negativity, but physical pain and negativity as well. However, in the midst of all the obstacles she was facing, she was able to remain resili ent and find ways to still be successful and overcome the obstacles. I find myself doing the same thing when im in difficult situations as well.
As a result, I found myself becoming really inspired by Tina Turner because I felt like I saw myself through her. Tina Turner has and will always be the foundation of current and upcoming female artists. Tina Turner's intelligence shined through her lyrics and actions. While being in this class I will follow in her footsteps and let my intelligence shine ythrough my schoolwork and my actions.
Michelle Obama has a long road ahead of her. Although her husband is the president of the united States, she still has her own really big responsibilities to take care. Not only does she have 2 daughters to take of, but she also has to be around to keep Barak Obama's in the proper stste of mind to handle his family and the USA.
Ever since Michelle Obama came on the scene, I've looked up to her. The reason why is because no matter what the media or anybody says about her, a smile continues to remain on her face with her head and her spirits still held high. That's why Michelle Obama reminds me a lot of myself. I am not easily broken an it takes a lot of hardwork and effort to bring me down. Positivity is the key to success and Miichelle Obama demonstrates this theory of mine very well.
I do believe that Michelle Obama should be important to everyone. Not only because shes the first lady, but because people can gain lots of knowledge and positive thoughts just by listening to some of her speeches or paying attention to her actions. Her words are powerful and meaningful, and her actions portray a very smart, attentive, and kind-hearted woman. I love Michelle Obama and I wish her husband and kids lots of luck.
Tuesday, September 1, 2009
My Goals
A main goal that I would really like to accomplish is becoming more diverse with my choices. Sometimes I lock my mind into liking only certain things when I really need to become a little more open minded to new off the wall ideas. For example, instead of using a rap or hip-hop song for a project or assignment, maybe I can try using a country or jazz song. Or maybe instead of using colored pictures for an assignment or a project, I can use black and white to give a different feel to the overall appearance. So just really expanding my choices and thinking not only out of the box, but out of this world as well.
I am sooo excited about this year and this class, and I can't wait to put forth lots of creativity and effort in all the things that I do.