S2 Blog two

In my office is where I awaited My key to new knowledge,Ms. Dion. Her Aldo stilettos got closer and closer, while my smile got bigger and bigger. She appeared, sat down, and here we are. Her presence is the beginning to part two of my journey. Her answers await my questions, and my interest awaits her story.

She stands about five foot seven. Her long curly hair gracefully lays down her back. Her smile can light up a room, while her style can light up a runway. Her dress nicely drapes her body, while her jewelry fabulously complemented her attire and her personality. She may be mistaken for a girly girl on the outside, but nothing less than a cannon ball on the inside. Her skill and work heavily contributes and enhances the work of the firm, along with her unique sense of humor contributes to the minds and hearts of those around her.

Mrs. Dion is originally from Kansas City Missouri, where she attended National University in Kansas City Kansas. Her original decision was to major in accounting, before she eventually changed it to computer science, and then later changed it again to business management.

Surprisingly, Ms.Dion did not graduate college with her major, but instead ended up doing modeling for a couple of years.

As a child, according to her, her life was interesting. She moved around a lot and shes lived a little bit of everywhere. She attended several schools in different states, but graduated from Central High School in Kansas City Missouri. Fortunately, with her eager to learn and absorb in new knowledge, her eyes were opened up to a lot of different things and cultures, about a lot of different people.

Although Ms. Dion was one of lucky few to be able to travel and experience the different lifestyles in different states, she soon made the important decision to leave Kansas City Missouri, and move tho San Diego California, where she currently works as a paralegal at the Wolfenzon Schulman & Ryan law firm, specializing in intellectual property, trademark, and civil litigation.


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